Giving

i only critiqued you once before so here it goes. your vision was ok, this is a very worn out topic but it seems you livened it up a little somehow. it caught my eye so that is a good thing. because if i saw it presented any other way i wouldn't have bothered critiquing it cuz it would be mean (sorry if that offended any of the readers readin this). your originality, no. this, like i said, is a very worn out topic. so you didn't ern alot op points for originality. the next sentences should make you feel alittle better. your tequnique, ABSOLUTELY AMAZING!!!! the detail in everything is amazing! the details on the coat and everything! but what really got me was the guys hair. how detailed it is. how it blows in the wind and stuff. impact, i cant wait to tell you!!! Despite the fact that it is a worn out topic, i really felt this piece.maby it was their eyes or their expression, but whatever it is it worked!
hope i didn't have too many typos,
soleatrcharchar123